Sunday 25 March 2012

Reroughing ideas for story

I figured that if i did the story from one of the Characters point of view it wouldn't cover the whole story and i can shorten it down to 5 pages really easily and still keep all the important information in,

I typed this for the speech of the pages and to help me create the comic panels easier

"My story began the moment he set foot into my life, like a bright star falling from heaven, he became a thing of beauty to my eyes, a jewel from another world that I longed to hold and before much time had passed I was deeply in love with him,

On the day of his departure to collect something of importance for my father, some one full of jealously and hate for him framed him for a crime, until the day he would return no would know of this treachery,

Unable to prove his innocents, he departed with a promise to me, we would be married once his name was cleared, and he left, I would never see him again ….

I was hounded for days by the villain of this tale, unable to keep him at bay I told my father of his actions, when turned away the villain struck back… in flames he burned along with my father’s work and home leaving us with nothing except each other.

My father lived happily for a while; along by the river he would fish proudly until the day of his death, which dawned on me to soon, leaving me alone ….

Shortly after one tragedy struck a new one befell upon me, my eyes turned cold and dark, I lost my ability to see the world and its beauty, and I could no longer see my fallen star…

As despair became my only companion he returned to me, I felt ashamed and scared he would not want a creature that could no longer see, but to my surprise he took my hand in his and took me away from darkness, a new bright world opened itself to me, one filled with happiness and joy.

My father’s spirited danced and fought with that of the villains on their memorial stone that my fallen star built for them."

And below are the rough plans of the pages:


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